Fantastic effort Wiremu - I really like the list of precise language you have created to describe each setting, well done! To extend upon some of the vocabulary you have used, you could use resources such as a thesaurus. Keep up the great work! - Mrs T
Hi Wiremu, I like the way you have used your descriptive words in phrases. As Mrs T said I think you would enhance your writing even more by using an online thesaurus as well. Just swapping out a few basic descriptors for some of those the thesaurus recommends would engage your reader even more. Keep up the good work!
Fantastic effort Wiremu - I really like the list of precise language you have created to describe each setting, well done! To extend upon some of the vocabulary you have used, you could use resources such as a thesaurus. Keep up the great work! - Mrs T
ReplyDeleteHi Wiremu,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have used your descriptive words in phrases. As Mrs T said I think you would enhance your writing even more by using an online thesaurus as well. Just swapping out a few basic descriptors for some of those the thesaurus recommends would engage your reader even more. Keep up the good work!